Review watch 9: all three

July 23rd 2011

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It’s about time I rounded up the non-Amazon reviews (though I would direct your attention to a couple of the more recent ones on the .co.uk site…)

Two reviewers have read all three and reviewed all three in the same blog post, which indeed makes sense. Considering the books in the round, does the series make sense? Is there a story arc that travels throughout? Does all the swearing and explosions get a bit samey after a while? Is there a law of diminishing returns?

Not according to Usagi, who not only loves the Petrovitch (“I’d totally date Petrovitch. In a heartbeat.”) but, after some (possibly accurate) criticism of my writing style from other reviewers – no, I don’t want you to have to reach for the dictionary every other sentence, and no, I’m not a great prose stylist like m’friend Chaz Brenchley (who I love – both him and his books) – says this:

“I think the best part about Sam as a character and Morden as an author is that you really live through Sam’s eyes the entire trilogy. You’re right there with him, right there next to him, inside of his head. This means everything – from his stuttering heart in the first book, to his broken heart over Maddy by the third book. You see, think, feel, smell, touch everything he does. Morden is a master with sensory language and the amount of showing over telling is overwhelmingly, joyously tipped in the “showing” direction – automatically making me love Morden. It’s so hard to do that, and doing that in a sci-fi genre book/series is even harder. I tip my hat in major respect for him being able to do that.”

That’s really quite lovely. And to continue the theme, Holly at Books for One has other nice things to say. She spots that I’ve actually written a character-driven SF series. SF is not renowned for its production of full-rounded characters, and yes, it often eschews character development for gadget-strewn, plot-heavy shininess (which I do enjoy, but sometimes it’d be nice to have people I care about in all the shenanigans). She finds Petrovitch’s determination “endearing” and is completely on-side the whole time, despite his anti-hero tendencies.

It has been pointed out that there are a lot of strong female characters. I didn’t consciously mean it to turn out that way, but that’s what organically evolved. Here’s what Holly says about some of them:

“There’s Valentina, a true Soviet communist to her red core and demolitions expert. Lucy, the schoolgirl found hiding in a bathtub from the outies who saves his life more than once. And of course Madeleine, the amazonian, Catholic trained bodyguard who does things to Petrovitch’s synthetic heart that has nothing to do with the fact it’s constantly malfunctioning. I adored all of these guys, they were all useful fully realised people, no extra bits of skirt who are only good for the hero to perv over in these stories…”

She concludes: “If you’re looking for something clever, fast paced and exhilarating then you can’t do much better than these three books. In Communist Russia book reads you.” Happy author is happy.

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Impromptu Equations of Life audio giveaway

July 16th 2011

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I received several copies of the US edition of the Equations of Life audio CD thingy yesterday – it’s exactly the same as the UK version, read by the magnificent Toby Leonard Moore, and contains every word (even the rude ones) of Equations of Life, complete and unabridged. 10.25 hours over 9 CDs, costing a smidgen under US$52.

Now, I already have a copy – so I’m going go give these babies away. And this is how I’m going to do it.

1. Take a photograph or short video of yourself (or have someone take a photo for you) doing something Petrovitchy. I leave the interpretation of this entirely up to you. I cannot condone you doing anything illegal within your jurisdiction (no matter how much fun it might be), and I insist you and any bystanders, human and non-human, are not endangered in any way before, during or after the recording of your entry. This is just for fun, okay?

2. Post it to me at bookofmorden1@blueyonder.co.uk (that’s a ‘one’ at the end, not a small L) and put as your subject line something like Competition entry or Petrovitchy goodness. Try not to break my inbox with massive video files…

3. I would like very much to be able to share any of the entries on a gallery here. If you don’t want me to do that, do say at the time, and as the creator of the work, you retain copyright at all times.

4. Closing date for entries is going to be one month from today, August 16th, 23:59 GMT

5. The three entries I deem have captured the spirit of the competition the best will receive one copy of Equations of Life, narrated by Toby Leonard Moore. I will post to anywhere on the planet and will even include low-earth orbit for the crew of the ISS.

Get going…

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The First Annual Orbit Summer Signing

July 8th 2011

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… or something like that.

There will be authors -Tim Lebbon, Philip Palmer, Nicole Peeler, and me. There will be books – Tim’s Echo City, Philip’s Hellship, Nicole’s Tempest Rising, and with luck and a following wind, all three Metrozone books. There will, undoubtedly, be some witty banter and authorial sagacity, and there will be the opportunity not only to buy books, but have them signed.

It will be in the Forbidden Planet store in Shaftsbury Avenue,  Olde London Town, 3-4pm on July 30th.

It would be brilliant if anyone’s within striking distance could come along (I know you’re all coming to see Tim, but share the love, okay?).

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Provoking a conversation

June 25th 2011

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Which I have done, in a small way.

In Theories of Flight, Petrovitch sets his two post-grad students a task: “Society. I want you to go and design me a human society. Not a utopia: one that acknowledges its faults and includes mechanisms to correct itself. One that’s better than the one we now have. Info-rich. Post-scarcity. Knowledge as currency. Stuff like that…Can you do it?”

Even though it’s meant to be a bit of make-work, to cover a turbulent time with a bit of focus, it does – of course it does – turn out to be pivotal. There’s a lot in a very few sentences. Non-utopian. Info-rich. Post-scarcity. Post-money. It’s a capitalist’s nightmare in black and white.

And user Hereford Eye has taken Petrovitch’s task as the starting point for their wonderment. Feel free to sign up and join in.

http://www.sffworld.com/forums/showthread.php?t=31432

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Politically correct? Anti-American?

June 14th 2011

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A recent comment on Goodreads has sent my usually chaotic thought-processes into an even more ragged whirl: I always consider this a bonus, because it means I read even more eclectically than I usually do in an attempt to justify what I’ve already done. “Of course I’m right, and if you give me half an hour, I can provide a dozen well-researched sources proving that!”

Okay. The charge is that Degrees of Freedom (and the whole Metrozone project) descends into “a politically correct thriller” that “barely deserves the sf label”. I’ll take the last one first, because “SF is what I say it is when I point to it and say ‘that’s SF’.” But also, Degrees of Freedom is (hopefully) clearly a story that wouldn’t exist without science, and has a scientific solution – which, to my mind and probably more importantly, my publishers, makes it SF.

The charge of ‘political correctness’ is more interesting, because the phrase itself is code. In and of itself, ‘political correctness’ (which I’m going to abbreviate to PC from now on, to save pixels) doesn’t actually mean anything that’s associated with either the P-part, or the C-part. Put them together, though, and what you have is a meta-contextual value-judgement favoured by those on the political Right to dismiss, without argument, something they disagree with. Labelling something as PC is not an argument. It’s not a knock-down blow. It’s code, and it’s complex. It’s meant to be an insult, but there are much more imaginative and accurate ways to be insulting. To whit: it’s lazy.

The chief exponents of PC-as-insult in these domains are parts of the British tabloid press. “PC gone mad!” is the reaction when a council bans parents from taking photographs of their kids in a Nativity play. And whilst you appreciate the child protection issues involved, it does seem more than a little stupid. It seems very stupid, in fact, and an error that is compounded by conflating such displays of wilful ignorance with either the Human Rights Act, or the Health and Safety at Work Act. But a lot of PCness boils down to basic decency. We don’t refer to blacks as niggers or coons, or people from Pakistan as pakis, Italians as wops, the Spanish as dagos, folk in wheelchairs as crips, those with physical disabilities as flids – because they don’t like it. Hell, I don’t like it. Just because we can, doesn’t mean we ought. We shouldn’t go out of our way to offend.  Making public buildings accessible to all is not PC. Insisting that women are paid the same as men for doing the same job is not PC. Suggesting that airbrushing black people out of your publicity material is wrong is not PC.

I don’t think Degrees of Freedom is guilty of that, however. Using my secret decoder ring, I’m taking a stab at the real reason for calling it PC is because religious Americans are the bad guys.

And actually, that is such an unnuanced statement, I’m going to qualify it: Reconstruction America, as portrayed in the Metrozone series, produces a mindset that inevitably leads to a set of motives and actions that are internally consistent and logical, but which appear to the protagonists as ‘the Americans are the bad guys’.

Reconstruction is, by the time the Metrozone series starts, a two decades-long experiment in social and economic engineering. It is extremely socially conservative, highly capitalist, and religiously patriotic. It takes seriously American Exceptionalism, is isolationist, and brutally Romantic, in that it holds up a Platonic ideal of America that everyone must strive for. It’s a binary ‘for us or against us’ view. It’s a reaction to the previous sixty years of expansionism and social change, and also to Armageddon. And while it’s clear to me that some people in the real USA would not only want the kind of society I describe but are actively campaigning for it, I know and thank God for the fact that it’s never going to happen. There’s the constitution and the amendments, there’s the Supreme Court, the elected representatives, the people. It’s a what-if. It’s not even an original what-if. American writers have used the right-wing quasi-fascistic government card so often, it’s almost a trope.

Religion is inextricably linked to that trope. There’s something iconic and eminently writable about the unholy marriage between American patriotism and protestant Christianity. Not all patriots are religious, not all Christians are ‘my country right or wrong’ patriots. But, yes, iconic and writable, and very visible. I actually get to hear speakers like Jim Wallis and Tom Sine – good evangelical Christians – who are of the left, so I know there are many flavours and textures to the religious landscape in the USA: all the same, the stereotype is the right-wing Christian, and you can’t be an evangelical without being on the right.

So this is the America I’m painting as ‘the bad guys’. Are they actually bad? That depends on your point of view, and the American government in the book doesn’t do anything that they don’t do either in real-life, or haven’t been portrayed as doing in other films and novels, written by Americans. Once you’ve taken Reconstruction as a given, the rest follows like night follows day. The US administration’s actions are entirely in line with the prevailing philosophical and religious outlook, and that’s as it should be. They don’t see themselves as bad. They’re not rubbing their hands like a cartoon villain. They’re doing what they need to do in order to further the interests of the United States of America. Which is again, entirely right and proper.

Am I being taken to task then, for showing the actions of a fictitious future government of a named country? Quite likely, yes. The rub, of course, is that the protagonists are an alliance of unstable hackers, traitors, and ne’erdowells who, if they profess any political allegiance would most likely tick the box marked Anarchist. If it’s unconscionable that a fictional USA is bested by this fictional gallery of rogues, can I suggest the problem might not lie within the book?

But I can’t know any of this for sure – because the charge of PC is, as I’ve already said, lazy. If you’re going to be critical, be specific, and be smarter.

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SFX interview

June 9th 2011

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I did an email interview for SFX (British SF/F/H magazine) which was far better than the review SFX did of Equations of Life. An edited version appeared in the print magazine, and now the extended text is up on the website. I am almost lucid in it.

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Review watch 8: all three

June 9th 2011

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Colour me confused. Now, I’m fully cognisant of the concept of ‘not owning your books once you’ve published them’, but I’m not going to pretend that I’m not keeping a watchful eye over proceedings.

Which is why I’m baffled at some of the contradictory responses to the words what I wrote…

I’m not sure I’ve mentioned either the Amazon or Goodreads reviews here before: ‘my’ Goodreads page is here, and by clicking on each individual book, you get a breakdown of readers’ responses. There are comments, too, and some of the reviews I’ve mentioned elsewhere also pop up here. All well and good – it’s a bit of fun, sharing your response to a book with others. And I’m gratified to see, I get some 5s, loads of 4s, some 3s… and so on. And no, I don’t expect everyone to love the books – they’ll appeal to a certain section of the audience, while leaving others meh.

The Amazon responses are a bit more, well, serious. It’s a market place. It’s where people come to buy books, not just swap opinions about them. I’m not going to poke holes in individual reviews, but yes. Contradictory about sums it up.

So – Equations of Life: Blue Gargantua calls Equations  “hands down, some of the best cyberpunk I’ve read in quite awhile”.

SFRevu has it’s third review of Equations (some sort of record?) by Liz de Jager: “Equations of Life is a great opener to this trilogy by Simon Morden. Petrovitch’s character shines brightly and Morden has given us a new kind of anti-hero, one who is likeable for all his unlikeability, and that is no mean feat.”

I’ve also stumbled on SFFMeta, which is a sort of review agglomerater. But rather than just take all reviews, it takes them from “trusted online sources”. Since publication Equations of Life has sat quite happily in the “Last 90 days high scores” table, and since reprinting, the “Last 90 days high scores – reprints” table, with a respectable 73 – which puts me in some very respectable company. And now the score has gone up to 75. Take that, rubbishy Amazon reviewers!

Reviews of Theories of Flight are still thin on the ground, but the first Degrees of Freedom ones have started appearing. There’s the usual (possibly slightly incoherent) one from Harriet Klausner. It means 4 stars on Amazon.

Best of all is TChris’ – now, he’s been reading the series through, and has had criticisms to make of both Equations and of Theories. I’ve won him over with Degrees, though! It’s a long quote, but it’s worth printing in full.

“It’s not that often I come to admire a fictional character, but Petrovich is a truly admirable creation:  a self-sacrificing hero, an idealist who refuses to be seduced by power and fame.  Petrovich is the kind of unwilling leader we wish for in the real world:  someone with the wisdom to exercise power nobly for the betterment of society before standing aside to let everyone else do their part.  He’s a character of sufficient complexity to experience guilt about the consequences of his actions without feeling remorse for doing the right thing.  He gives a speech toward the novel’s end about how he’s changed because of the events described in the trilogy, how he’s learned to be unselfish, to value his friends and to be a reliable friend to them, but it’s clear that Petrovich had integrity from the start, and it’s his integrity, his consistent refusal to take the easy path when he doesn’t feel it’s morally correct, that makes him so interesting. “

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I have become Death, the Destroyer of Worlds

June 3rd 2011

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Tis true. I have sunk Japan, laid waste to Europe and even trashed my own country. So why is London still there?

Believe it or not, I actually put some thought into that one – and the answers are now up on the Orbit website.

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Fancy some wallpaper?

June 3rd 2011

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… because the ever-lovely Lauren Panepinto has some for you – and in various sizes to fit your preferred electronic device. Click here for the Orbit website and the post in question.

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Review watch 7: Equations and Theories

May 23rd 2011

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Having singularly failed to have been raptured over the weekend, it’s back to the ho-hum daily grind of attempting to be one of the good guys in an often crazy world. So how are we doing?

Equations of Life continues to turn up in the most unlikely of places. For example, the Otago Daily Times. Where’s that based, you ask? New Zealand, which is about as far from home as it can get. The headline reads “Futuristic post-apocalyptic thriller pacy, exciting” which pushes all the right buttons.

Hyper-critical.net (which is a cool name for a blog) gives Equations “6 oversized pistols” out of ten, but I have the sneaking suspicion that they enjoyed it more than that… they conclude “Despite being a little predictable in places, Equations of Life is a good, solid read. Morden has crafted out an interesting world, and shown us a brief glimpse of it. The teaser for Theories of Flight, the second book in the trilogy, moves Petrovitch forward in his career as a scientist, and I’m looking forward to see how Morden opens up his story to us.”

Erika over at Jawas read, too, Equations gets 7/10 – again, noted as a good, fun read. “This action-packed, futuristic novel offers readers a quick, pulse-pounding glimpse into a world torn apart by technology and the weaknesses of humanity.”

Disorganised, as usual has some (most likely entirely valid) criticisms, but comes to the opinion that “Equations of Life kept me entertained.  I was fully engaged and absorbed in it, and kept eagerly picking it up again to find out what happened next.  Which makes this a far more successful work, in my mind, than the new China Mieville novel, which I am currently struggling to force myself to finish.  I want to enjoy the fiction I read, and I enjoyed Equations of Life.  And that’s the only thing that matters, in the end.”

The reviews of Theories of Flight have been a bit slower coming in: to be expected, I think, with the 3-in-3 months thing. However, one interesting one has turned up, by Sarah at Workaday Reads. She gave Equations 3 stars. She gives Theories 4. That actually means quite a lot.

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